I’m still trying to pull my place back together after the upheaval with the plumbing remodel and I’m behind on literally everything.
And since I need to dive back into that, I’ll just post up my six (okay seven) sentences and run. Hopefully it won’t take me all week to comment like last week.
Continuing with These Haunted Hills Brendan and Josh are now inside the hotel which is dusty, moldy and otherwise boring Brendan out of his mind.
“I’m getting a hint of how edited the ghost TV shows are to make it seem more exciting.”
“I guess it can be tedious.”
The hurt tone made Brendan turn to face Joshua. He looked suddenly younger and like his dog had been kicked. “I’m not bored,” Brendan said hurriedly. “I suppose I expected a little more…action? I don’t know or maybe you yelling like a bully at the ghosts. I’ve never understood that.”
“Seems like bad idea to me.” Joshua perked up. “But honestly it is usually a lot of tedium interspersed with moments of craziness.”
If you’d like to play along, Rainbow Snippets is a Facebook community where we post up 6 sentences of one of our LGBT stories every Saturday. It’s been fun and you can find it here. Be sure to check out all the offers! It’s been a great supportive group!
Jana Denardo 
Oh, nice! I like how different each snippet is. And so good! Happy writing, my dear.
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Thanks so much.
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I love the description of Joshua when he realises Brendan is bored. Happy writing, and don’t worry, it takes me ages to comment too most weeks.
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Thanks. Oh yeah man, just need more hours in a day or something.
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I like Brendan’s empathy. 🙂 But maybe they need to be careful what they wish for, hmm?
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Brendan is going to SO regret being bored.
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Heh, that’s an excellent point.
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Thanks. Yes, the TV shows are highly edited and yelling at ghosts is probably never a good idea.
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Something tells me Brendan won’t be bored for much longer. Looking forward to see what’s coming!
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He assuredly won’t be, thanks.
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Loving the last line. That sentiment cover a lot of situations…
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THanks. That’s true.
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