Doing this early because my mood is awful and I need a distraction. At least I get to go see my BFF from college tomorrow.
Since you asked I would LOVE to see more positive Science Fiction and more fantasy that is more personal quest vs epic political battles.
I’m continuing with These Haunted Hills. Josh & Brendan are still examining the recordings they made at the haunted hotel.
“Sure.” Josh started the tape keenly aware of how close Brendan was. He could feel the man’s breath. It made his skin shiver. It made concentrating difficult, at least briefly. The recording sucked him in. The excitement of the black shadow frittered away as perfectly normal moments ticked by. A ball of light flickered along the ceiling rolling down the hall.
Brendan’s chair scraped on the woodened floor as he jumped then leaned forward, hand on Josh’s shoulder as he peered at the computer screen. “Did you see that?”
If you’d like to play along, Rainbow Snippets is a Facebook community where we post up 6 sentences of one of our LGBT stories every Saturday. It’s been fun and you can find it here. Be sure to check out all the offers! It’s been a great supportive group!
I’d love to be watching what they are watching right now!
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Thank you. For that matter, so would I
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Cool! I’m with Louise. ~grin~ Thank you for sharing. And Happy Writing!
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I am too. Thanks
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Great snippet. Love his excitement.
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THanks
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I can feel the tension there.
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thanks
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What did he see? What did he see?
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Light phenomenon! thanks
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Love the tension and how it makes me want to read more. Well done!
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thank you very much
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How exciting for them to be able to see what they missed while living those scary moments. ♡
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Thanks, exactly Josh’s thinking
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Oooh. Yep, that’d bring me out of my seat.
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Oh yes it would. Thanks
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Love the tension in this snippet.
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thank you
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