Writing this up on the fly as I fail miserably at keeping on point with my lectures.
Still in These Haunted Hills They’re out of the attic and Brendan has been left with Hoshi and her twin Kasumi (who is talking first)
“I don’t mean to be strange but has anyone told you have a very odd aura. I wasn’t going to say anything but it’s hard for me to take my eyes off it.”
Brendan stared for a moment, trying to figure out what to say to that.
“I agree,” Hoshi said.
“I can honestly say no one has ever mentioned the word aura to me.” Brendan knew what they were of course even before he had started researching this for the novel. It was one thing more he wasn’t sure he believed in but he was willing to entertain the notion for the sisters. He didn’t want to insult them. “What’s wrong with it?”
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Intriguing!!
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thanks
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Lol – I’d be wondering too! 🙂
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Thanks, can’t blame you
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Emphasizing a lot with Brendan here…I remember once being in a very similar position. Great snippet!
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Oh my!
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Lol, yeah I’d want to know too!
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He definitely wants to know
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I wouldn’t know what to say to that either, but I’d be really curious.
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He’s definitely curious
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Yes, what’s wrong with it, if anything. More to the point, what makes it noticeably different?
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They are about to tell him
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I don’t think there’s something wrong with his aura, strange or unusual perhaps. It’ll be interesting to see what.
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It’s based on the idea that trauma changes the color
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Oh! Neat!
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Well, that comment came out of nowhere. He seems to be handling it well, though.
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Yes I suppose it does. thanks
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