F is for Flash Fic

F is for Flash fiction. Flashfic is harder to write than you’d think. The idea behind it is, of course, to be quite short so you can read it in a flash. I find it a very good training tool in many ways. I’m wordy by nature. I write long, too long, if I’m not careful. Most flash fiction is under 1,500 words and some is significantly shorter than that. It challenges you to be very aware of your word choice and story structure.

I need this. Almost every one of my short stories ends up having too much story in them and they don’t work nearly as well as they should. By accepting flash fic challenges, it helps you hone your craft (and maybe drive you a little insane). I first started these challenges in fandom drabble communities (a drabble being only 100 words). I remember one friend asking me why I bothered. She didn’t like drabbles, she didn’t see the point in fiction so small. I explained the discipline behind it as the reason I did it. Truthfully though, I prefer longer fiction. I’m a novel reader. I struggle with reading anthologies because I’m not overly fond of shorter fiction.

That said, I appreciate the lessons it has to teach me as an author. There are tons of flash fic challenges out there. The Facebook community, Queer Sci-Fi does one yearly for the last four years. I took the challenge in year two and three (placing into the final anthology). I skipped the first year as I had just joined the community and was a bit shy. I did just send mine in for this year. It is a contest. Will I win? Who’s to say? That’d be sweet but I enjoy being part of the whole process so it’s okay if I don’t. Their contest is rather hard actually with 300 words being the top word count.

Lex Chase has a challenge she runs intermittently and I just came up with a steampunk for that. I’m proud of that little story. And for the followers of Chuck Wendig, they’re well aware he often runs flash fic challenges on his blog. I don’t’ find the time to write for his challenges nearly as much as I’d like (it’s often weekly. There are other weekly flash fic challenges out there but I don’t really have the time/discipline to do those). If you don’t follow Wendig’s blog , I do recommend it. Word of warning fuck is one of his favorite words (for those of you who are more gently turned than I.) He does very good inspirational posts in addition to the flash fic.

So to the authors out there who haven’t given flash fic a try, do. It’s a very different challenge in comparison to other forms of writing.

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E is for Editing

E is for editing. I love writing most days. I’m not sure I have ever had a day that I’ve loved editing. Most of us look at our stories as our children and who wants to chop them to bits? Of course, editing is very important. Nothing I write would be half as good without editing. For me it’s a threefold process. I do my own editing but let’s be honest, I am often blind to my own mistakes. Seriously, I have no idea how I miss some of the things I do. Then again, I’m often shocked how much I miss coupled with my beta readers and the actual editors and I’m on like edit three and there is some huge clunker that slid by all of us.

If I’m the first fold, my beta readers are the second. I’ve been lucky to have a few good betas willing to put up with me. It would be nice to have a few more but finding a beta is almost as hard as finding a publisher. And fold number three would be those publishing house editors. I’ve been very lucky with my editors at the houses I’ve worked at. They’ve been tough but fair. Only once did I really feel like there was a serious disconnect between me and my editor (It was on a third draft which is usually just little bit of clean up and this new editor seemed to hate everything about that novella).

That is one thing about traditional publishing. You get an editor. You’re not hanging out there on your own. However, if you are, my advice, find a beta reader or join a local writers group (yes I know this can be fraught with danger. A bad group will damage you in ways you might not even see at first.) I’ve joined a lot of newsletters lately between insta-freebie and other giveaways that trade a story for signing up for the newsletter with an eye to future sales. (Another thing fraught with danger as I’ve more books than I could possibly read at this point).

I can’t even tell you how many self-pubbers I’ve seen saying in their newsletters ‘well I couldn’t afford an editor so I didn’t bother editing it and now all my reviews are whining about this novel needing editing.’ Honestly if you put that in your newsletter, I’m probably going to delete your freebie. (I mean, seriously even if it’s true you probably shouldn’t advertise that!) I’ve seen a variety of variations on this theme and it all traces back to not bothering with editing in the first place.

The other thing I’ve seen lately within these newsletters, people coming out with a new book every few weeks. I write. I’ve been writing for nearly 40 years. I know I personally can’t turn out quality work in just a few weeks. I might be able to write something in that time, witness nanowrimo but I would never send it out there that fast. I’m not sure I believe someone can write something in just a couple of weeks, get it edited and refined and out to us in the time frame I’m seeing with some of these. It’s made me hesitant to read anything by them.

But maybe that’s just me. I might not like editing but I know its value. If I’m putting it out there, it has been edited.

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D is for Dark

D is for The Darkest Midnight in December.
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This novella featuring my 1930s demon hunters, the Soldiers of the Sun, Caleb, Agni, Temple & Li. Actually it started out as a short story about a krampus-like demon (the French version, Le Père Fouettard) running through the remains of a reclusive religious group outside of Pittsburgh, in Old Economy Village (now Ambridge) for a Christmas anthology.

Shockingly they didn’t want a Christmas story about a demon that eats little kids! 🙂 Instead I decided to fluff it up a bit with more story adding in a second demon, blood/lifeforce- sucking alps. Did I mention alps, in some of the literature, resemble butterflies. Yeah, blood sucking butterflies (One of my friends who’s no longer with us used them in a Mulder/Scully-esque story that stuck with me.)

I had paid a visit to Old Economy Village before writing this and felt like I needed to use it.

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I love using places I’ve been in my stories. I had really wanted to write something more for Caleb and company and realized this would be just perfect for them. I’ve been attracted to stories with the monster of the week sort of theme for years. Buffy the Vampire Slayer is still one of my favorites in that genre and the Soldiers of the Sun stories are my homage to those shows.

Even though I know this novella is a hard sell – I mean, come on historical urban fantasy? – but I love these characters and I love writing them. It does make me a little sad that their story doesn’t get around a bit more (and it’s not helped by the fact it’s listed as romance and it’s not a romance, so people end up disappointed). I love them for all their faults and hope there are a few out there who do as well.

Blurb The year is 1930, and something is hunting infants and young couples in Economy Village, PA. When a local priest begins to suspect a demon may be the culprit, the sheriff calls in a team of Soldiers from the Sun.

Caleb, Agni, Temple, and Li specialize in demon hunting, but they can’t rule out an old religious sect as the true culprit. Prejudice, distraught parents, and angry townspeople don’t make the team’s job any easier. And if something goes wrong, they’re on their own, because by the time their backup arrives, it will be too late.

You can find it for sale here.

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Cover Reveal: Serpent’s Kiss by Layla Dorine!

Check out Layla’s newest cover!

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Serpent’s Kiss Blurb

While searching for their missing sibling, Zaiden and his sister come across the last pure blooded seer of their kind. Unfortunately for them, Darian has no idea what he truly is and isn’t much interested in helping.

A bounty hunter by trade, who’s been all but banished from his family due to his visions, he’s a bit cynical about his ability to be of any use to them. Never-the-less, Zaiden brings him back to their home compound, where Darian discovers that very little is what it seems.

With plots unfolding all around them and discoveries about his own heritage leaving Darian reeling, he is left with the choice of whether to embrace who and what he is, or spend every moment with them a prisoner on the fringes of their society.

Add in a pesky little bond that only seems to grow the more time he and Zaiden spend together, and several factions looking to possess him and Darian is left wondering if his visions just might be the least of his troubles.

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LAYLA DORINE lives among the sprawling prairies of Midwestern America, in a house with more cats than people. She loves hiking, fishing, swimming, martial arts, camping out, photography, cooking, and dabbling with several artistic mediums. In addition, she loves to travel and visit museums, historic, and haunted places.
Layla got hooked on writing as a child, starting with poetry and then branching out, and she hasn’t stopped writing since. Hard times, troubled times, the lives of her characters are never easy, but then what life is? The story is in the struggle, the journey, the triumphs and the falls. She writes about artists, musicians, loners, drifters, dreamers, hippies, bikers, truckers, hunters and all the other folks that she’s met and fallen in love with over the years. Sometimes she writes urban romance and sometimes its aliens crash landing near a roadside bar. When she isn’t writing, or wandering somewhere outdoors, she can often be found curled up with a good book and a kitty on her lap.

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C is for Con

C is for con but the good kind. Anime, SF, Comi-cons! I’m a huge fan of the geeky conventions. I’ve been going to them for 30 years and frankly I’ll be cosplaying old women in years to come (Oh to have Lwaxana Troi’s figure…). I thought about how could I use this in my writing because fiction has to come from things I know about and care about if it’s going to be any good.

Years ago I wrote a story about two elves at an anime con, Sion and his blind son, Ioan which are updated versions of characters I’ve been writing for 20 years, mostly for my friends’ entertainment. Sion is an elfin prince, bisexual and has an affinity for humans. Roy is a detective who usually attends all things geek with his partner who was out sick for this con. At loose ends, Roy finds himself dressed as the partner to the character Sion is cosplaying. Needless to say they hit it off. Unfortunately for Roy, Sion is often a target for Dokkalfar assassins (the traditional enemy of the liosalfar like Sion.) Murders start happening at the con and Roy ends up in the crosshairs.

I put this story away for years after it didn’t make the cut for the original anthology I wrote it for. Heck, I don’t even remember what that was. This year ManLoveRomance had an anthology about the fey up for open call and they took the story. I don’t have details yet on when it’ll be out. Haven’t got the first round of edits yet but I’m excited.

I had started a few months back a novel set at a con but this one contemporary, another use for the abbreviation ‘con.’ I’m not a contemporary writer or reader. In fact I actively avoid reading it but that’s where publishing is going. That depresses me as it leaves me a lot less in the way of choices as a reader, not to mention as an author. I decided if contemporary is the wave of the near future (okay it’s always been popular. Maybe I should say the sad decline in genre sales…) then I should at least try it.

I had some ideas for the contemporary. I researched it. I started it. I set it aside. It’s going to take me time to write it because seriously, contemporary fiction doesn’t fire me up. I will have to take it in bites that I can get excited about and break it up with things that burn through me better than normal people doing normal things. The only thing worse than writing contemporary would be to write it badly, No one wants to read a boring story.

I think I might need to go to a con to fire me up.

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