Rainbow Snippet

I’ll be honest I’ll be late on getting to reading everyone’s as I’m up to my eyeballs in the first edits for the vampires in Vegas novel which are, not unexpectedly, substantial. Also it’s raining so bad here, it’s flooding everywhere and my place is surrounded by a creek so…

Anyhow, I’m continuing with These Haunted Hills Brendan and Josh are now inside the hotel. Josh has turned Brendan loose with an EMF reader and he’s busy poking it into the old bedrooms. The EMF reader has gone off and Brendan realizes he no longer knows where Josh is and has been calling for him. (slightly more than 6 sentences but they were very short ones.)

Joshua popped around the corner. “Find something?”

“Think so. Look! If I put my hand through the door, the EMF really goes off.” Adrenaline shocked Brendan’s system more alive than he’d been in a year or more. “Promising?”

“Very! Okay, I’ll record. You can put away the EMF and try to get some digital photos.”

Brendan demonstrated one more time that the lights only lit up inside the guest room – because it was just that cool – and then pocketed the device. “The door is a bit stuck.”

“Let’s see if we can get it far enough open so we can slip in there.”

If you’d like to play along, Rainbow Snippets is a Facebook community where we post up 6 sentences of one of our LGBT stories every Saturday. It’s been fun and you can find it here. Be sure to check out all the offers! It’s been a great supportive group!

16 thoughts on “Rainbow Snippet”

  1. ”Brendan demonstrated one more time that the lights only lit up inside the guest room – because it was just that cool—” made me giggle. Sounds like something I would do in the same situation 🙂

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