I picked a little more from the short story Modified and Sacred for this week (and probably next). Still waiting to hear if it’s been accepted for the anthology.
In this snippet Deveral (coming out of the dark cave) meets Addison for the first time. (I think it’s one sentence over).
His escort stood less than average height but muscular, his short black hair almost razor sharp. Deveral’s vision wasn’t cleared enough to pick out any more details other than the man had a bland expression on his handsome face.
“Kinsman Deveral, this is Lieutenant Addison Hunt. I know he’s early but he seemed interested in the First Temple. I hope it’s all right I brought him here,” Weyba called.
Deveral smiled. He loved people with curious minds though he wished he had on more clothing than the sodden waist wrap. Enough water had wicked up the linen to make it cling to his thighs and ass.
If you’d like to play along, Rainbow Snippets is a Facebook community where we post up 6 sentences of one of our LGBT stories every Saturday. It’s been fun and you can find it here. Be sure to check out all the offers! It’s been a great supportive group!
Jana Denardo 
Yep, clingy linen wraps are the pits! 🙂 Great description, though.
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Thanks (and yes they can be especially if you’re going commando under it)
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Oh, my, one’s imagination goes wild with what Addison Hunt must be thinking! 🙂 Good luck with the submission!
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hahaha, Addison is mostly thinking ‘huh, the living god dude is almost naked and I can see the outline of his junk. Sweet.’
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Deveral might be wishing he had more on, but I wonder if Addison has a different feeling on the subject.
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Hahaha Addison might. I think at this point he’s merely bemused.
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That’s gotta be quite a first impression. LOL
I do love that Deveral loves people with curious minds.
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It was certainly a good first impression and an awkward one too.
Deveral shares that with me.
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